I have a secondary character who lives directly across the street from school she attends with Linnea. She makes it a POINT to say she lives across from the school. That is, I made her make a point of saying this since I'm the one supposedly writing these scenes.
So why is this same character riding a school bus, back and forth, back and forth, every day with Linnie?
For 100 pages!!!
Oooh, I'm on a reeeeal roll now, hammering out pure unmitigated idiocy with each clueless keystroke.
Goal for tomorrow: fix it.